thunder rolled softly down the faint outline of my thighs
i thought i saw you stare straight out at me in the darkness
and felt my heart beat faster in the caged space that exists between us
your eyes pierced blue waters in my soul
and i was lost in a sea that you could control
i felt thimbles of wonder commit to my fingertips
and wanted to stretch the feeling 'til it was overdue
'til it could no longer last
let's live in this darkness
with a faint glowing light
and spend our days close to one another
catching glimpses and glances and second chances
in moments that end and begin in corresponding rhythms and beats
did you feel my thoughts slip over to you
my gaze take you in and breathe you out
like you were brand new
did you feel the pull of my magnetic heart
or did you simply stare out into the dark
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Eyes
The eyes of the soul
sees deeper in blackness
(blackness is thicker then darkness).
[Someone ever told me that "night is not dark but black"]
Beautiful writing!
thank you both :)
nice,
this ones got a subtle viceral-ness (sp?), a connection to the body (bawdy? nah classier but close), a cinematic heart pound. always a pleasure reading your stuff
aww thank you for the comment
"classier but close" - luv that line
i'm still waiting to read some more from you :)
I love that; its funny how concentrating on someone will create that magnetic energy and the intuitive will pick up on it... Hello!
it's funny and pretty sweet as well
hello hello
:)
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